Monday, April 5, 2010

Birthday Reflections

A young man, ready

to embrace the future

heard the call of duty

went to war

and was killed.


His sister named her first born

after her dead brother, who

a generation later

heard the call of duty

went to war and was killed.


His sister named her first born

after her dead brother, who

a generation later

heard the call of duty

but did not go to war

and so lives to write this poem.

Peter Goodwin

2 comments:

  1. Form for April 5th: Haiku/Senryu


    Must write a haiku
    Blank stubborn paper below
    Above drifts a cloud.



    Pure Senryu

    Bizarre Japanese
    Syllables count but not rhymes
    This is poetry?



    May Kuroiwa
    Tomorrow: Tanka

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  2. I took my brand new sprayer
    down by the waterside
    I wanted to kill algae
    so mixed some algaecide
    in no time flat I soaked the weeds
    and viewed the mess with pride
    but then I lost the sprayer tip
    without the tip it only dript
    I wailed and wept and lost my grip
    down by the waterside

    I leaned into the water
    and moved my hands around
    the algae was stained turquoise
    the mud was somewhat browned
    the algae, it was winning
    my hopes were nearly drowned
    but then I found a sprayer tip
    not in the pond: I took a trip
    to the garage, and gave a yip
    Yippe! for what I'd found

    was yet another sprayer
    belonging to my dad
    the motor long stopped working
    in fact, it had gone bad
    But I was very happy
    in fact, I was darn glad
    to see that yellow sprayer's tip
    with that old tip I could equip
    my new one. Then I let 'er rip
    and now I am not mad!

    Maggie Creshkoff

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